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Hush
My tired angel
Just fall asleep and dream
Your thoughts they will untangle
Flowing like a stream

Be silent and don't linger
In this world we live awake
Sleep now forever peacefull
With every wish you make

Just relax in this here after
Sleep tight and do not cry
Let all your dreams care for you
Like a babies lullaby

Make sure you do not worry
Let your thoughts just fly away
Everything is alright here
Your blue skies no longer gray

Your mind will care for you
Destroying all that lie
Like a cloud of white
In a sorry sky

To make yourself feel better
You only need to dream
You only need to think that
Nothings is as it seems

So drift away from this world
Let it carry you along
Ill stay by your side
To make sure nothing goes wrong

You can count on me my angel
I am all you need
To make sure that you make it
To your sleepless dreams
There you go. Sometimes dreams are just better than reality aren't they?
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Anorien- Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2006
oh my god!!!!
im soo watching you this is beautiful!
my boyfriend calls me Angel and this poem is like everything he's said ~^^~

this is wounderfull keep writing ^^!!!!
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Lyfsabitch Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2007
hahah thanks
I have to start writing some more soon
I kinda went into a slump where i didnt feel like writing lol
But im back now
And im glad you liked it :D
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Anorien- Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2007
=D!!!!!!!
yea i have thos times when im just like... i wana write something but i have like writers block and its all like xP
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Anorien- Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2007
xD awsomeee!
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Lyfsabitch Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2007
hahaha your like totally just in my mind...like wow man...wow ;P
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choppersrule Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2006   Photographer
AWWW its so so..... AWWWWW lol ur pro at rymeing *my speeling sucks
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Lyfsabitch Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2006
hahaha thanks....its too bad no one else realizes that ;p
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SaintlyDark Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2006
Wonderful little piece.
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Lyfsabitch Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2006
thanks :D glad you like it!
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Sheltan Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2005   Photographer
An intruiging rhyme scheme and the pacing is great.
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